The night before Halloween.

It was the night before Halloween and the Brown family were fast asleep. Only two people were awake and that was Angus and Martin the twin brothers. Suddenly there was a thud, “Did you hear that?’’ asked Martin. “Yes let’s go and see mum and dad.”  They went into the bedroom and mum and dad were gone.  Just at that moment there was another thud, “It’s coming from the basement,” said Angus.  They went down to the basement and there was a cauldron.  It was sizzling and it was filled with gloop.  Angus leaned closer and closer and then his brother fell in.

“Where are we?” said Martin.  “I don’t know,” replied Angus.  “We should ask that lady,” said Martin.  “Excuse me where is this?” said Angus.  The lady turned around and they both saw she was a witch.  “ Run!” shouted Angus. They were screaming and running for ages with the feeling of spiders on their feet.  The witch was just a bit behind when they ran into a big hut.  The witch locked them in. Angus was shaking. “You look petrified,” said Martin. “So do you,” said Angus. “Hey are you just going to sit there?” said a voice. “Aagh!” shouted Angus. “A talking rabbit,” said Martin.  “I’m called Nick here is the way out,” Nick pulled two floorboards out. “Down here and we will be back in the village,” said Nick. They all crawled down and they were back in the village.

“Hey you escaped!” shouted the witch. She was about to cast a spell.  “Oh no this is the end!” cried Angus.  Suddenly Nick muttered some words and shot them at the witch.  The witched stopped.  “She’s turned good,” said Martin.  “Thanks Nick,” thanked the twins. “By the way my name is Sally,” said the witch.  Suddenly some wind came and was blowing the twins up to the real world. As they went lots of Halloween monsters were singing, “Trick or treat, treat or trick, we’re gonna have sweets with Sally and Nick. Treat or trick, trick or treat, lots of yummy things to eat!”  When they got back they both said, “I’ll never forget this night before Halloween!”

Andrew

The Haunted House

My story takes place in an old haunted house.  In the haunted house lived a disgusting, revolting, rotten, greedy, green monster and four vicious, wrinkly ghosts.  There’s a legend that the haunted house was a tour place when people used to come.  They say they could hear four terrifying sneaky ghosts.  Five children were trick or treating.  Their names were Jack, Dylan, Ethan, Kyle and Logan.  They went to the haunted house for some sweets.  They all chapped on the door.  Nobody answered.  Suddenly the door opened but nobody was there.  Ethan shouted trick or treat into the haunted house.  Logan heard evil laughter in a secret room.  They couldn’t get into the secret room because there was a man-eating plant.  The plant could smell the sweets.  Jack threw a sweet for it.  They tricked it.  Ethan was petrified.  There were three witches drinking potion.  Outside the haunted house was surrounded by tombstones.  Four ghosts were in the living room.  They could not see the ghosts.  Just then a green, slimy, greedy monster was coming down the staircase of 100 steps.  They had nowhere to go.  They waited until the monster got close to them, then ran to the front door.  It slammed shut.  The five boys were stuck in there forever.

Jack

Wenda the Monster

Wenda is a friendly monster.  She is tall and round.  She has four octopus arms.  Her face has a pink eye with two eyebrows like yours and mine.  Her village is called ‘W’ world.  Her husband’s name is wants-a-lot and her two children’s names are Wonky and Wondy.  She has jelly legs and a pink dress with a purple bow.  Her body is purple and her neck is all covered in patterns.  Her best friend is called Coral.  Wenda loves living in ‘W’ world.  The mall is Wenda’s favourite place.  Her dog’s name is Waddle.  ‘W’ world is the best place on earth!

Sophie

Zomber the Monster

My monster is a big monster.  Zomber lives in a fancy wardrobe.  His body has lots of slime on it with wrinkly skin.  All my friends hate him because he has blood coming out of his mouth.  He has lots of scars on his face.  Zomber has a human hand and a monster hand.  My monster’s arms are as long as a train, with smally, horrible, flexible and smooth legs.  His friends are called Jelly, Andrew and hairy Amber.  My monster loves to eat cake.

Amy

The big performance

My heart was racing as the crowd clapped.  I walked slowly to the microphone.  After I sang my song the judges said it was excellent.  At the results the judge said I had won the X-Factor!  I got £100000 and a trophy.  I was crying with happiness!  I could not believe it!

Gordon

The big day

I felt nervous.  Dermot shouted me.  I nervously walked onto the stage, close to the microphone.  I was so nervous I didn’t sing for 20 minutes.  Finally I sang.  After my song had finished Kelly said, “Wow baby, you put it down!”  Then Dermot said, “You have won the X-Factor!”

Eve

The day I became famous

My heart was pounding and my hands were shaking.  I nervously walked onto the X-Factor stage.  Then I sung the first note.  All the judges put a cheesy grin on their faces.  Then Gary stopped the music and said, “That was … AMAZING!” and all the other judges shouted “You’ve won!”

Lewis