Thursday 9 February 2012

The Haunted House



My story takes place in an old haunted house.  In the haunted house lived a disgusting, revolting, rotten, greedy, green monster and four vicious, wrinkly ghosts.  There’s a legend that the haunted house was a tour place when people used to come.  They say they could hear four terrifying sneaky ghosts.  Five children were trick or treating.  Their names were Jack, Dylan, Ethan, Kyle and Logan.  They went to the haunted house for some sweets.  They all chapped on the door.  Nobody answered.  Suddenly the door opened but nobody was there.  Ethan shouted trick or treat into the haunted house.  Logan heard evil laughter in a secret room.  They couldn’t get into the secret room because there was a man-eating plant.  The plant could smell the sweets.  Jack threw a sweet for it.  They tricked it.  Ethan was petrified.  There were three witches drinking potion.  Outside the haunted house was surrounded by tombstones.  Four ghosts were in the living room.  They could not see the ghosts.  Just then a green, slimy, greedy monster was coming down the staircase of 100 steps.  They had nowhere to go.  They waited until the monster got close to them, then ran to the front door.  It slammed shut.  The five boys were stuck in there forever.
Jack

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